Just wanted to let you know, I think your doing a great job and your passion is easily noticed. It shows what a dedicated person and leader you are!
Great Job!
Sounds interesting and your sales pitch is good. You can improve it and here is how. Use less filler words. You said “You know” 21 times. You said uh/um 12 times. Filler words are a distraction. Improve your pitch and you’ll improve your sales.
September 13th, 2008 at 3:08 pm
Just wanted to let you know, I think your doing a great job and your passion is easily noticed. It shows what a dedicated person and leader you are!
Great Job!
Amy P
November 17th, 2008 at 12:07 am
You are doing a wonderful job!
July 20th, 2009 at 4:40 pm
Sounds interesting and your sales pitch is good. You can improve it and here is how. Use less filler words. You said “You know” 21 times. You said uh/um 12 times. Filler words are a distraction. Improve your pitch and you’ll improve your sales.